Hi. I think that your moving image was a bit too fast in order for me to read. I loved the words spoken and why you chose the ballad. I found very few or no mistakes. That music was good for the ballad. Next time slow the pace down a tiny bit more in order for the watcher to read otherwise I would love to see more ballads from you. Just a question too. Did you purposely make it rhyme?
Hi. Good words chosen in this poem. Some slides were a bit too fast for me to read the full sentence. The poem made sence and the photos and music matched the writing. Good job Brookieboodles. :)
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ReplyDeleteI think that your moving image was a bit too fast in order for me to read. I loved the words spoken and why you chose the ballad. I found very few or no mistakes. That music was good for the ballad. Next time slow the pace down a tiny bit more in order for the watcher to read otherwise I would love to see more ballads from you. Just a question too. Did you purposely make it rhyme?
Hi. Good words chosen in this poem. Some slides were a bit too fast for me to read the full sentence. The poem made sence and the photos and music matched the writing. Good job Brookieboodles. :)
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this Brooke. I had plenty of time to read the text and look at the images. Well done.
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